If anyone has a couple of free minutes, please could you have a look at the short story-thingie I just put up? And then come back here and answer a question about it?

(It has a couple of naughty words; sorry about that.)

Here's the story. I'll wait here. The question's slightly spoilerish in itself, you see...

Ah, some of you are back. Thanks. So: could you tell what the protagonist was, by the end? Too obvious/not obvious enough?